11th march 2013
Assalamualaikum
and hello people!!
Essay day!!
Today, we have to
present an essay from each group.
During the
presentation, Miss Zu has given each a comment on how they write the essay.
Every group has their own mistake, so that Miss Zu had told us to rewrite the
essay by correcting the error.
for my group, it
doesn't have many problem in it because we followed all the requirement and the
example essay that Miss Zu gave to us.
Overall for each
group, there are many mistake wuth the body paragraph. The body paragrah must
have a topic sentence and controlling idea; at least 3 supporting details; at
least 1 example and last but not least a conclusion. After finish correcting
the error we must print the essay and give the essay to the rest of the class.
That's all. Thank
you.
12th march 2013
Assalamualaikum
and have a nice day, people!
Essay day!! AGAIN.
But for today, we
had learn on how to do a conclusion.
Drawing
conclusions is a form of critical thinking. It is relating what you see, hear
and read to what you already know. When draw a conclusion, you use all the
facts that you can find in the passage to help you deduce or figure out what
you do not know. There are some expressions that point to a conclusion such as
thus, it is believed that, in fact/because of this, it follows that, it
concludes that, as a result, therefore, we can deduce that, points to the fact
that, and lust but not least prove that.
That's all the
explanation for conclusion. Thank you!
15th march 2013
Assalamualaikum
people!
What a beautiful
FRIDAY!
Today, I will make
a presentation with my group members which is my beloved friends, seha and
farahin.
Alhamdulillah.
Everythings gonna be fine.
After finish
present, we had prepared a game for class. The game was likely a musical chair,
but for this game they will play a song and after the song is stop for a while,
one person will be chosen to answer the question on the notepad. The two groups
got the same mark, then I ask for a representative for each group to write a
sentence about what they have presented. So, group Syaz won for the game.
It seems like they
enjoy with the game.
for the other
group is Haziq and Adli.
That's all. Thank
you.